An Erasure Poem. I chose part of a song I wrote and created a new poem with it.
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W3 #197
An Erasure Poem. I chose part of a song I wrote and created a new poem with it.
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Hi, Kaci❣️
Just wanna let you know that our W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Svenja, is live until tomorrow:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/02/11/w3-prompt-198-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
Kaci — “Broken vows trace my heart” feels especially stark to me. I love how the erasure leaves only what aches and endures.
~David
Thank you, David. The words stared me in the face.
~ Kaci
*hug*
Beautiful poem, Kaci!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Great take in a few words. beautiful.
Thank you, Indira. 😊
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Very powerful in so little words! Nice one!
Thank you so much.
Nice one!!
Thanks!
It gives it a different spin.
Nice one Kaci 👏 Did the meaning change from the original?
I try to make sure to clear all of the Grammarly suggestions when screenshotting but don’t always catch them all!
The basic idea is still there. Just a lot less of it. My first try. 😄
Sometimes, when we revisit things like this we realise we can say things clearly with more brevity. I’m not a big fan of long poems! Haha!
I tend to like all forms and enjoy trying out new ones and old, as well as creating creating forms.
I took another photo and fixed the Grammarly lines.