
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/01/21/w3-prompt-195-weave-written-weekly/
I have a round red pin from my childhood that says peace. Wish I could find it in my box of mementos.
Peace
Each person, I believe, would say,
Peace, the thing we hold dear;
Our stance.
We need this peace to light the way!
The time of peace is near.
Perchance.
Obedience, the price to pay:
Raise your glass! Give a cheer!
Advance!
Manipulation on display.
The time for peace is here.
Slim chance.
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme 👏👏👏 Great memento!
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Thank you!
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Very clever! Are you related to a John from CT by any chance?
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I don’t think so.
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Doesn’t hurt to ask. I find its a small world sometimes!
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Definitely! My relative, George Cutshaw played baseball with my husband’s relative, Topper Rigney 100 years ago! Small world? You bet!
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Wow, that’s pretty cool!
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Right? We were so surprised!
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Lovely write, we need all they symbols and voices for peace we can find!
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Yes, we do!
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Me thinks, it will get much worse before it gets better. You have captured the cry of our hearts- now we just keep doing the next right thing- until our cries are heard.
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The only peace we will find, will be in our hearts and minds when we give our worries to God.
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So well written, Kaci. The same end rhymes maintained in both stanzas and the meter give your memento a great rhythm. A powerful poem. I hope you find your pin.
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you liked it.
It’s in a memento box somewhere. 🙂
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I love the rhythm and rhyme of your poem, Kaci!
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Thanks so much!
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Just wonderful 🙌
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Thank you so much.
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❤️
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Kaci, I love this one! Beautifully executed and topically truthful!!
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Thank you.
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Peace or freedom? It sees that they cannot coexist. Or at least, there’s only a ‘slim chance’. 👏
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Thanks for your comment. 🙂
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